WHAT’S INSIDE THIS PACKAGE
⭐️ Story Premise — high-concept pitch, elevator pitch, and K-lytics market validation with dual-category positioning (Romantic Comedy + Workplace) and competitive analysis against three comp titles
⭐️ Complete Codex — full story bible with main characters Phoebe and Griffin (full internal landscapes, voice examples, and example passages for both POVs), supporting cast of four including Lynette, Dessa, Beck, and Harlan, three primary settings (the Inn at Maple Ridge, Room 7, and the retreat barn), five-day chapter-by-chapter timeline, full comedy mechanics with running gag log and three set piece breakdowns including the ropes course, innovation challenge, and journaling share, dual POV voice guidelines, and series seeds for two future Inn at Maple Ridge books
⭐️ Chapter-by-Chapter Outline — 20 chapters + epilogue with scene-by-scene breakdowns, emotional beats, comedy beats, key dialogue, and chapter-ending hooks for every chapter including the campfire reveal and the grand gesture email
⭐️ AI-Ready Chapter Prompts — fully self-contained copy-paste prompts for all 20 chapters and epilogue with scene summary, emotional beat, comedy note, voice reminder, decision, tone, and hook
⭐️ Marketing Copy — Amazon listing with two categories and seven keywords, back cover copy, 50-word description, Instagram post and story slides, TikTok/BookTok caption, Facebook post, newsletter announcement with three subject line options, reader magnet concepts and landing page copy, series marketing, and Ideogram cover prompt
⭐️ Market-Matched™ Brief — market snapshot table, five data-backed “Why This Will Sell” bullets, competitive positioning, seven-keyword strategy with rationale, and full launch positioning including pricing, cover direction, seasonal window, and series release cadence
One buyer. One story. Exclusively yours.
OUT OF OFFICE
Phoebe Strand has spent eight months conducting a polite but pointed email war with someone in marketing she’s never met. The arguments are technically courteous, specifically reasoned, and considerably more interesting than any professional correspondence has a right to be. She reviewed the retreat roster on the drive to Vermont and confirmed that G. Wicker was not among the twelve attendees. The roster was current as of 3pm Friday.
It is now Sunday and G. Wicker is checking in at the desk twelve feet from where she is standing.
Before Phoebe can process what “Griffin” means in a practical sense — there’s a water main break that takes out four guest rooms and leaves one remaining double, a retreat facilitator who describes this as “wonderful for connection” and means it, a Professional Relationship Inventory worksheet they have to complete together about their working relationship that neither of them can answer honestly in public, a ropes course where they are assigned as belay partners and the belay relationship requires complete physical trust, a campfire where they both tell the story of the same eight-month email correspondence from opposite sides without naming each other, and conversations in the dark after midnight when the professional performance has been running too long to maintain.
She’s spent eight months being right about the emails and has been carefully avoiding the question of why she found being right so interesting. He’s spent eight months treating their correspondence as the most engaging professional challenge he’s had in years and has been calling this “a useful working dynamic” for long enough that he’s stopped examining the phrase.
A five-day Vermont wellness retreat with mandatory trust exercises is about to make distance very difficult for both of them.
Enemies-to-lovers slow burn where the grand gesture is an email — subject line: Re: Professional Relationship Inventory (Revised) — and the third sentence is not about work. The kind of book that makes you want to open a pointed email thread and finally say what you meant.
WHY THIS WILL SELL
→ Romance > Romantic Comedy sits at 8.7 sales-to-comp (Hot Mainstream) with ~120 daily sales per top-20 title — enemies-to-lovers is the #1 reader preference trope; workplace rivals context stacks directly on top
→ Dual-category play with Romance > Workplace (10.1 sales-to-comp, Hot Niche) — legitimate positioning in two high-volume categories, peer dynamic avoids power-imbalance concerns
→ The identity reveal mechanic is a fresh differentiator — eight months of emails, no photos, first meeting at check-in; no current Top 100 title uses this in a corporate retreat setting
→ “The roster was updated on Friday” is a one-sentence premise — instantly legible, inherently funny, built for BookTok sharing
→ May/June launch targets peak summer out-of-office demand — title resonance + Vermont setting captures the seasonal window with no direct competitor in the corporate retreat niche
→ 3-book Inn at Maple Ridge series with ensemble seeded in Book 1 — Harlan, Lynette, and two future protagonists established; readthrough built in
TROPES:
• Enemies-to-Lovers
• Forced Proximity
• Workplace Rivals (Peer Dynamic)
• Slow Burn • Stuck Together
• Identity Reveal
• One Room
• Grumpy/Sunshine
HEAT LEVEL: Moderate / Closed Door
Perfect for fans of: Christina Lauren, Emily Henry, Elizabeth O’Roark, and Sally Thorne