WHAT’S INSIDE THIS PACKAGE
⭐ Story Premise — high-concept pitch, elevator pitch, and K-Lytics market validation with dual-category positioning, trope mapping, comp authors, and series framework
⭐ Complete Codex — full story bible with main characters (Calder and Veth with full voice notes, internal monologue examples, and required dialogue), supporting cast of 5, five province settings with full sensory detail, 31-chapter timeline, relationship arc breakdown, complete Burning Coin economy rules, Saints system, old pantheon history, heat level guidance, and series seeds for 4 future books
⭐ Chapter-by-Chapter Outline — 30 chapters + epilogue with emotional beats, word count targets, scene breakdowns, required key dialogue, sensory anchors, chapter endings, and connection-forward notes
⭐ AI-Ready Chapter Prompts — detailed writing instructions for every chapter with world-state context, POV voice reminders, required dialogue, sensory details, and emotional beats for alternating dual POV
⭐ Marketing Copy — Amazon listing with categories and keywords, three back cover versions, storefront description, trope packaging, comp author positioning, newsletter templates, social hooks, ARC notes, and series launch strategy
⭐ Market-Matched Brief — one-page story bible with concept, protagonist summaries, road structure table, relationship arc mechanics, market positioning, price recommendation, and two Ideogram cover prompts
One buyer. One story. Exclusively yours.
SAINT OF THE BURNING COIN
Calder Voss was a First Blade of the Imperial Legion — the kind of soldier who executes an order cleanly, files the report, and doesn’t examine the gap between what he was told and what he did. Three years ago, that gap swallowed sixty-three people and whatever he was before he became the man who followed the order. He sold what was left of himself at a minting station and went to ground in a fighting pit on the empire’s edge. He has five soul-fragments left.
Then a woman with ink-stained hands and a glass locket at her throat walks through the crowd and says: “You have five left.”
She knows where all six of his Burning Coins are. She’ll take him to every one — in exchange for an escort to the imperial capital, through four provinces, one kill-squad, and the god-emperor’s personal attention.
Before they get there, there’s the grey occupied March, the glass plains left behind when divine fire swallowed a rebellion whole, the ancient Ironwood where a massacre happened twelve miles east of his hometown — and across all of it, a contract filling up with margin notations that started as operational clauses and became something neither of them agreed to write.
She has spent three years carrying the last surviving god of the old pantheon in the locket at her throat. He has spent three years deciding that what he wants doesn’t matter. She hasn’t told him what the soul reclamation was designed to cost him. He hasn’t told her that the reason he agreed so quickly is the reason she’s counting on.
A road through four provinces is about to make both of them wrong about themselves.
Grimdark road-trip fantasy for readers who want the slow burn inside the dark fantasy — the kind of book where the relationship builds in contract margins across ten weeks of occupied road, and the ending is earned.
WHY THIS WILL SELL
→ Fantasy > Sword & Sorcery sits at 6.4 sales-to-comp (Hot Niche) with 131+ estimated daily sales per top-100 title — grimdark + slow-burn emotional structure targets the underserved reader who wants Abercrombie-level moral weight with a relationship engine
→ Dual-category play with Fantasy > Dark Fantasy gives legitimate positioning in two high-demand categories simultaneously, with crossover discoverability into romantasy without requiring high heat
→ Series positioning captures the 89% of Fantasy Top 100 that are series — four-book framework plants the readthrough hook in Book 1 with unresolved series threads (Sable’s mystery; the distributed god-fragments) that pull readers forward
→ Dual-POV slow burn is the underserved gap in grimdark — romantasy readers who want lower heat and darker stakes; grimdark readers who want emotional payoff; this package sits in the overlap neither category currently owns
→ KU enrollment at 78% of Fantasy Top 100 makes this a strong KU play — the Abercrombie/Kristoff reader is a heavy KU user and series read-through on this emotional structure is high
TROPES:
• Slow Burn
• Reluctant Partners
• Competence as Intimacy
• Road Trip / Quest Structure
• HFN (Happily For Now)
• Morally Grey Protagonist
• Found Family
• The Secret She’s Keeping
• Forced Reliance
HEAT LEVEL: Sweet / Closed Door
*includes Dial the Heat™ guide to adjust heat level
Perfect for fans of: Joe Abercrombie, Jay Kristoff, Marion Blackwood, and T. Kingfisher
