WHAT’S INSIDE THIS PACKAGE

⭐️ Story Premise — high-concept pitch, elevator pitch, and Market-Matched™ analysis with dual-category positioning (Psychological Suspense + Women Sleuths), competitive analysis against the domestic suspense landscape, and the full Suspense Architecture including the six-clue fair-play ledger, red-herring map, and solve-point identification

⭐️ Complete Codex — full story bible with complete profiles for Nora Ellery and Paul Ellery, supporting cast of five, the unnamed mid-Atlantic suburb and StoreSafe storage facility settings, present-day linear timeline with a fully reconciled hidden timeline (what actually happened in the 14 months before page one), close-third-person unreliable-narrator voice system with four distinct example passages, and the complete concealment ledger and fair-play audit

⭐️ Chapter-by-Chapter Outline — 36 chapters + epilogue with emotional beats, word-count targets, scene breakdowns, chapter-specific sensory detail, clue-planting and payoff tracking by chapter, red-herring introduction and resolution records, and documentary-evidence log

⭐️ AI-Ready Chapter Prompts — one copy-paste-ready writing prompt for every chapter and the epilogue, each fully self-contained with complete character context, continuity facts, clue-planting instructions, “do not reveal” constraints, and chapter-specific voice guidance for Nora’s forensic close-third narration

⭐️ Marketing Copy — Amazon listing with categories and keywords, book description, back cover copy, 50-word short description, Facebook post, Instagram caption, newsletter announcement with three subject-line options, comp authors, reader targeting, and research-grounded Ideogram cover prompt

⭐️ Market-Matched™ Brief — market snapshot, why-this-will-sell analysis, competitive positioning against three comp titles, seven-keyword strategy with per-keyword rationale, and launch positioning covering categories, pricing, cover direction, and companion strategy

One buyer. One story. Exclusively yours.

EVERY OTHER FRIDAY

Nora Ellery is very good at finding things. She’s spent twenty years as a school-district budget analyst — the person who notices the $340 variance no one else caught, the rounding rule hiding in the vendor’s software, the pattern that only becomes visible when you go back to the beginning and look. She is precise, methodical, and professionally incurious about her own marriage by long habit.

Then she runs into her sister-in-law at the pharmacy line.

She mentions Paul’s Friday evenings at his brother’s house — the standing arrangement, fourteen months of it, the text when he arrives. She watches her sister-in-law’s face rearrange itself into something that isn’t confusion. She drives home. She does not call Paul. She opens the bank statements, because numbers are the one thing she has never been wrong about.

Before she can put the pattern down, there’s a Keswick branch ATM that shows up on every other Friday for fourteen months like a line item in a standing invoice, a shared calendar block with no location attached — the only item Paul maintains without a linked address — a wifi network name visible on his phone for four seconds before the screen locks, and a financial profile that is too organized, too consistent, and far too expensive to be what she assumed. The answer the spreadsheet is building is not a betrayal story. It is something stranger, more human, and fully documented. And the most damning entry in the ledger — the one she returns to every time she thinks she’s finished — is not his.

She has spent twelve years married to a man who counted on her not to look. She is only beginning to understand how much she cooperated.

A domestic suspense novel about a woman who audits her own marriage — and what it costs to see the books clearly. The kind of book where the reveal you didn’t see coming is the one about yourself.


WHY THIS WILL SELL

→ Psychological Suspense is the #1 highest-selling subgenre in Mystery, Thriller & Suspense on Kindle — a large, actively buying category with repeat readers who reward books that earn their reveals

→ Dual-category positioning in Psychological Suspense + Women Sleuths captures two high-demand lanes simultaneously, maximizing discovery surface

→ “Not an affair” is the premise’s commercial differentiator — domestic suspense readers are trained to expect infidelity; a secret that is stranger, fully clued, and more human drives the word-of-mouth that sustains mid-list performance

→ The forensic-narrator structure builds reader participation — a real solve point rewards the reader who has been running ahead of the protagonist; the “I figured it out at chapter X” conversation is BookTok and Bookstagram native

→ The moral-ambiguity ending is a book club asset — the protagonist isn’t innocent, the ending isn’t comfortable, and the reader has to decide what they think of Nora before they can decide what they think of the ending

TROPES:
• The quiet suburb
• The marriage that looks fine
• The wife nobody would call a victim
• Gaslighting with a documented paper trail
• Forensic narrator
• Unreliable narrator (self-deception, not amnesia)
• The complicit bystander
• A spouse whose secret is stranger than an affair
• Complicity as the real reveal
• The ending that costs something to choose
• Moral ambiguity without resolution
• The paper trail as protagonist
• The parallel investigation

CONTENT INTENSITY: Moderate — dread and moral discomfort; no on-page violence; no romance subplot

Perfect for fans of: Lisa Jewell, Shari Lapena, B.A. Paris, and Ashley Audrain